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AdventChild01
Female 18 years old   United States
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Original Post #4987   ( 01/07/08 - 05:35 PM )   Topics | Quote | Reply  

Post your lyrics! If your working on a song, just post a little and see what people think of it, and/or if you get stuck ask for some advice.

Here is a song I wrote a little while ago, hope you like it! ^_^

Hopeless
You sit in a corner, cold and alone.
Betrayals of the past haunt your mind.
There is no one to turn to,
No one to look up to.
Wondering what to do next,
Curiosity fills the mind,
Desires take over your soul,
Death lurks close behind.

*Chorus*
Open the curtains and see the light,
Make sure Death is far out of sight.
Break the chains of the past,
And show the world you can last.

Feeling hopeless, you want to break.
Blinded by your fears,
Controlled by lies,
You are lost inside.
No where to turn,
No where to run,
Death is the only thing by your side.
But don't be afraid,
And don't give up.

*Chorus*

You are the only one that can break the chains.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

So yea.. that's it for that song ^^




AdventChild01
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User Reply #162593   ( 01/16/08 - 10:24 AM )   Topics | Quote | Reply  

umm anyone else? ^^'




save-me
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User Reply #167857   ( 07/09/08 - 02:52 AM )   Topics | Quote | Reply  

nice song ^^ uhmmm heres a kinda old one of mine called sweet charade

Slowly a little girl creeps down the stairs
She knows every body's secrets, but no one cares
She will expose us for what we are
Mere mortals of flesh and blood
Who have come this far

So...

Let's carry on with our sweet charade
And wear our silver masks
Come and join this masquerade
Don't stop... no matter who asks

There is a clever boy across the street
Who can feel our blood pump and our hearts beat
He has discovered it all
And can easily bring about our downfall
Through his shining eyes
We can see our demise

but...

Let's carry on with our sweet charade
And wear our silver masks
Come and join this masquerade
Don't stop... no matter who asks

Close by there's a family living in a basement
Answers to all questions are in their minds like cement
They know what we do and who we are
And they are raising the bar
We are still alive
So it doesn't matter

Lets...

carry on with our sweet charade
And wear our silver masks
Come and join this masquerade
Don't stop... no matter who asks

It's common knowledge now
Who and what we are
So go ahead and take a bow
After all we've come this far
We are human but what's the big deal
As long as the lives we live are really real

So we might as well

Carry on with our sweet charade
And wear our silver masks
Come and join the masquerade
Just don't stop... It doesn't matter who asks




AdventChild01
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User Reply #167867   ( 07/09/08 - 11:39 PM )   Topics | Quote | Reply  

very cool!!! its different which is good!




AdventChild01
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User Reply #167868   ( 07/09/08 - 11:58 PM )   Topics | Quote | Reply  

im working on a song called 'Listen to the tear drops'

I have over 20 songs i made... but the one that is the most emotional for me is called 'Running Away' and i would like to share it with you guys ^_^ its about...well a recent break up :/ so yea...

Running Away
I don't want you to give up your dreams,
I just want to help you achive it.
I want to help you through tough times,
And I want to be there for the best.
Cross my heart and hope to die,
I promise to never leave your side.

Chorus- Why are you running away from me?
Am I that scary to you?
What is is that you are afraid to see?
Why are you running away from me?!

I thought you said you loved me,
I thought you said you cared,
So why did you leave me like this,
When I was handing you my heart?
It's not a sacrifice to be with you,
So why do you think so?

*Chorus*

Is it me? Is it you?
What is it that I have to do?
Please just tell me the truth!
Is it me? Is it you?
What is it that I have to do?
Please just tell me the truth!

*Chorus*

So...yea that's it... ^_^ I know it's not that good, but it came from the heart, so theres nothing more you can ask for -^-^-




save-me
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User Reply #167872   ( 07/10/08 - 04:18 AM )   Topics | Quote | Reply  

niice... i like your songs... lately i haven't been able to finish any of the songs i start... i think the last song i finished was over a year ago already... T.T oh well hopefully one of these days i'll be able to finish something... uhmmm... heres another oldie... and kinda weird ^^

Werewolves creeping down the alley
Their every where in the valley
If you hear them say "Hunting's fun"
Then you had better run

Run, run away 'till you can't run no more
Run, run away 'till your flat on the floor
Run
Until your gasping for breath
Run
Run to your death

Vampires stalking down their prey
Your fears won't go away
The battles all ready won
Go ahead and run

Run, run away 'till you can't run no more
Run, run away 'till your flat on the floor
Run
Until your gasping for breath
Run
Run to your death

Dragons flying in the sky
Don't you wonder why
Black streaks across the sun
Hurry up and run

Run, run away 'till you can't run no more
Run, run away 'till your flat on the floor
Run
Until your gasping for breath
Run
Run to your death

Monsters hide under your bed
Terror p____ through your head
Teeth as deadly as a gun
Get up and run

Run, run away 'till you can't run no more
Run, run away 'till your flat on the floor
Run
Until your gasping for breath
Run
Run to your death

Run, run away 'till you can't run no more
Run, run away 'till your flat on the floor
Run
Until your gasping for breath
Run
Run to your death

Run...




AdventChild01
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User Reply #167876   ( 07/10/08 - 11:45 AM )   Topics | Quote | Reply  

awesome i like your songs too! i have one like that, its called, "In My Head" lol im to lazy to write it right now LoL




save-me
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User Reply #168249   ( 07/22/08 - 12:41 AM )   Topics | Quote | Reply  

cool thanks ^^ meh other than that i've only got a few work in progress songs lol




AdventChild01
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User Reply #168250   ( 07/22/08 - 12:59 AM )   Topics | Quote | Reply  

sweet!




save-me
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User Reply #169000   ( 08/02/08 - 08:11 PM )   Topics | Quote | Reply  

yep... hopefully i'll be able to actually finish one of them some time soon ^^




ALLAN
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User Reply #172900   ( 01/24/09 - 01:05 PM )   Topics | Quote | Reply  

Fall for you...^_^

the best thing about tonight's that we're not fighting
could it be that we have been this way before?
i know you don't think that i am trying
i know you're wearing thin down to the core

but hold your breath
because tonight will be the night
that i will fall for you over again
don't make me change my mind

or i won't live to see another day
i swear it's true
because a girl like you is impossible to find
you're impossible to find

this is not what i intended
i always swore to you i'd never fall apart
you always thought that i was stronger
i may have failed, but i have loved you from the start

ohh, but hold your breath
because tonight will be the night
that i will fall for you over again
don't make me change my mind

or i won't live to see another day
i swear it's true
because a girl like you is impossible to find
it's impossible

so breathe in so deep
breathe me in, i'm yours to keep
and hold on to your words 'cause talk is cheap
and remember me tonight when you're asleep

because tonight will be the night
that i will fall for you over again
don't make me change my mind

or i won't live to see another day
i swear it's true
because a girl like you is impossible to find

tonight will be the night
that i will fall for you over again
don't make me change my mind

or i won't live to see another day
i swear it's true
because a girl like you is impossible to find
you're impossible to find




xionjed
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User Reply #179110   ( 03/13/09 - 05:52 PM )   Topics | Quote | Reply  

Mad - Ne-yo

Oooo oooo oooo
Oooo oooo ummm

She’s staring at me, I’m sitting wondering what she’s thinking
Ummm Nobody’s talking, cause’ talking just turns into screaming (Oooo)
And now yes I’m yelling over her, she yelling over me,
all that that means is neither of us are listening,
and what’s even worse, that we don’t even remember why we’re fighting

So both of us are mad for nothing, (fighting for)
nothing, (crying for)
nothing, (oohh)

When we won’t let it go for nothing, (come back for)
nothing,
it should be nothing
to a love like what we got oh baby

I know some times it’s gonna rain,
But baby can we make up now
cause’ I can’t sleep through the pain (can’t sleep through the pain)
girl I don’t want to go to bed, mad at you
and I don’t want you to go to bed, mad at me
no I don’t want to go to bed mad at you
and I don’t want you to go to bed, mad at me (oh noo)

Umm
and it gets me upset girl when you’re constantly accusing
(asking questions like you already know)
hey we’re fighting this war when both of us are losing
(this ain’t the way that love is supposed to go, whatever happened to working it out?)
We fall into this place where you ain’t backing down, and I ain’t backing down,
so what the hell do we do now?

So both of us are mad for nothing, (fighting for)
nothing, (crying for)
nothing… (oohh)

When we won’t let it go for nothing,
nothing,
it should be nothing
to a love like what we got oh baby

I know some times it’s gonna rain,
But baby can we make up now
cause’ I can’t sleep through the pain (can’t sleep through the pain)
girl I don’t want to go to bed mad at you
and I don’t want you to go to bed, mad at me
no I don’t want to go to bed mad at you
and I don’t want you to go to bed, mad at me (oh noo)

Oh baby this love ain’t gone be perfect, (perfect perfect oh no)
And just how good it’s gonna be
We can fuss and we can fight long as everything is alright between us before we go to sleep…

Baby we’re gonna be…

Yah…. Baby….

ohhhh….ohhhh

I know some times it’s gonna rain,
But baby can we make up now
cause’ I can’t sleep through the pain (can’t sleep through the pain)
girl I don’t want to go to bed mad at you
and I don’t want you to go to bed, mad at me
no I don’t want to go to bed mad at you
and I don’t want you to go to bed, mad at me (oh noo, nooo, noo)




xionjed
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User Reply #179111   ( 03/13/09 - 05:53 PM )   Topics | Quote | Reply  

Hero / heroine - Boys Like Girls


It’s too late baby, there’s no turning around
I’ve got my hands in my pocket and my head in a cloud
This is how I do
When I think about you
I never thought that you could break me apart
I keep a sinister smile and a hold of my heart
You want to get inside
Then you need to get in line
But not this time

Cause you caught me off guard
Now I’m running and screaming

I feel like a hero and you are my heroine

I won’t try to philosophize
I’ll just take a deep breath and I’ll look in your eyes
This is how I feel
And its so so real
I got a closet filled up to the brim
With the ghosts of my past and the skeletons
And I don’t know why
You’d even try
But I won’t lie

You caught me off guard
Now I’m running and screaming

I feel like a hero and you are my heroine
Do you know that your love is the sweetest sin?

And I feel a weakness coming on
Never felt so good to be so wrong
Had my heart on lockdown
And then you turned me around
I’m feeling like a new born child
Every time I get a chance to see you smile
It’s not complicated
I was so jaded

And you caught me off guard
Now I’m running and screaming

I feel like a hero and you are my heroine
Do you know that your love is the sweetest sin?

(I feel like a hero and you are my heroine)
And I feel a weakness coming on
Never felt so good to be so wrong
Had my heart on lockdown
And then you turned me around
(Do you know that your love is the sweetest sin?)
I’m feeling like a new born child
Every time I get a chance to see you smile
It’s not complicated
I was so jaded

(I feel like a hero and you are my heroine)
And I feel a weakness coming on
Never felt so good to be so wrong
Had my heart on lockdown
And then you turned me around
(Do you know that your love is the sweetest sin?)
I’m feeling like a new born child
Every time I get a chance to see you smile
It’s not complicated
I was so jaded




dreaMsouL
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User Reply #179119   ( 03/13/09 - 06:03 PM )   Topics | Quote | Reply  

hey....ung sarili nyong gawa n kanta....hahaha!
inde nyu nmn gawa yan....hayyy....




insikmaniac
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User Reply #194221   ( 05/28/09 - 12:02 AM )   Topics | Quote | Reply  

yup! make your own lyrics! /swt

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Skinny Puppy
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User Reply #194228   ( 05/28/09 - 02:50 AM )   Topics | Quote | Reply  

This Piece Of Me

Chanting,
the living m____
whispered seeds of hate,
brings unseen,
impossibility,
and a growing seal of fate.

An emptiness,
so vile,
real and it's distorted,
screaming,
silence is good enough.

--- Warning,
it's creeping,
brings out the ravaged,
mindlessly shallow,
swallowed in shadow,
and it's in this..........

Words shouted black,
grave dances,
they were contorted,
(twisted)
searching blindly,
(blindly searching)
wasting,
in stranger lands.

Unity of minds,
grief twisted,
non emotion,
no presence,
a sufficiency,
exact and extreme.

--- Mourning,
objective season,
burnt offerings,
to an empty godless,
face,
hourgl____
impatiently,
revolving,
as the hammer falls.

It's growing,
on empty staircase,
the things in the hall,
vacant voices,
follow,
whispering......

Seal me,
among the wicked,
gone to seed,
still impotent,
in a sea of greed,
lust,
uninhibited rust,
crushing,
and thus discarded,
this piece of me.........

C.L.Rich 2003
Copyright © 2009 Christopher Rich
All Rights Reserved




H2K
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User Reply #204319   ( 09/15/09 - 10:00 AM )   Topics | Quote | Reply  

I feel caged but in no way are you an accomplice.
I caged myself due to my lack of will to fight.
I feel that we'll drift apart if we take no part,
In believing we are apart of more then ourselves.
We can awaken our own doomsday,
If we don't make risks we are dead as can be anyway!
This we all will soon to see,
So take part of the love within heart.
Know your place and believe in faith!
I have risk upon you a heart that is true,
Believe that I do, I have faith in you too.
Just push on through don't lust the untrue!
I am humble to one and not one to jump the gun.
So please don't make fun of my humble to one.





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