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| AdventChild01 |
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Female 18 years old United States |
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Original Post #4987
( 01/07/08 - 05:35 PM )
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Post your lyrics! If your working on a song, just post a little and see what people think of it, and/or if you get stuck ask for some advice.
Here is a song I wrote a little while ago, hope you like it! ^_^
Hopeless
You sit in a corner, cold and alone.
Betrayals of the past haunt your mind.
There is no one to turn to,
No one to look up to.
Wondering what to do next,
Curiosity fills the mind,
Desires take over your soul,
Death lurks close behind.
*Chorus*
Open the curtains and see the light,
Make sure Death is far out of sight.
Break the chains of the past,
And show the world you can last.
Feeling hopeless, you want to break.
Blinded by your fears,
Controlled by lies,
You are lost inside.
No where to turn,
No where to run,
Death is the only thing by your side.
But don't be afraid,
And don't give up.
*Chorus*
You are the only one that can break the chains.
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So yea.. that's it for that song ^^
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| save-me |
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Female 17 years old United States |
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Beginner
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User Reply #167872
( 07/10/08 - 04:18 AM )
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niice... i like your songs... lately i haven't been able to finish any of the songs i start... i think the last song i finished was over a year ago already... T.T oh well hopefully one of these days i'll be able to finish something... uhmmm... heres another oldie... and kinda weird ^^
Werewolves creeping down the alley
Their every where in the valley
If you hear them say "Hunting's fun"
Then you had better run
Run, run away 'till you can't run no more
Run, run away 'till your flat on the floor
Run
Until your gasping for breath
Run
Run to your death
Vampires stalking down their prey
Your fears won't go away
The battles all ready won
Go ahead and run
Run, run away 'till you can't run no more
Run, run away 'till your flat on the floor
Run
Until your gasping for breath
Run
Run to your death
Dragons flying in the sky
Don't you wonder why
Black streaks across the sun
Hurry up and run
Run, run away 'till you can't run no more
Run, run away 'till your flat on the floor
Run
Until your gasping for breath
Run
Run to your death
Monsters hide under your bed
Terror p____ through your head
Teeth as deadly as a gun
Get up and run
Run, run away 'till you can't run no more
Run, run away 'till your flat on the floor
Run
Until your gasping for breath
Run
Run to your death
Run, run away 'till you can't run no more
Run, run away 'till your flat on the floor
Run
Until your gasping for breath
Run
Run to your death
Run...
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| xionjed |
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Male 18 years old Philippines |
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Starter Poster
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User Reply #179110
( 03/13/09 - 05:52 PM )
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Mad - Ne-yo
Oooo oooo oooo
Oooo oooo ummm
She’s staring at me, I’m sitting wondering what she’s thinking
Ummm Nobody’s talking, cause’ talking just turns into screaming (Oooo)
And now yes I’m yelling over her, she yelling over me,
all that that means is neither of us are listening,
and what’s even worse, that we don’t even remember why we’re fighting
So both of us are mad for nothing, (fighting for)
nothing, (crying for)
nothing, (oohh)
When we won’t let it go for nothing, (come back for)
nothing,
it should be nothing
to a love like what we got oh baby
I know some times it’s gonna rain,
But baby can we make up now
cause’ I can’t sleep through the pain (can’t sleep through the pain)
girl I don’t want to go to bed, mad at you
and I don’t want you to go to bed, mad at me
no I don’t want to go to bed mad at you
and I don’t want you to go to bed, mad at me (oh noo)
Umm
and it gets me upset girl when you’re constantly accusing
(asking questions like you already know)
hey we’re fighting this war when both of us are losing
(this ain’t the way that love is supposed to go, whatever happened to working it out?)
We fall into this place where you ain’t backing down, and I ain’t backing down,
so what the hell do we do now?
So both of us are mad for nothing, (fighting for)
nothing, (crying for)
nothing… (oohh)
When we won’t let it go for nothing,
nothing,
it should be nothing
to a love like what we got oh baby
I know some times it’s gonna rain,
But baby can we make up now
cause’ I can’t sleep through the pain (can’t sleep through the pain)
girl I don’t want to go to bed mad at you
and I don’t want you to go to bed, mad at me
no I don’t want to go to bed mad at you
and I don’t want you to go to bed, mad at me (oh noo)
Oh baby this love ain’t gone be perfect, (perfect perfect oh no)
And just how good it’s gonna be
We can fuss and we can fight long as everything is alright between us before we go to sleep…
Baby we’re gonna be…
Yah…. Baby….
ohhhh….ohhhh
I know some times it’s gonna rain,
But baby can we make up now
cause’ I can’t sleep through the pain (can’t sleep through the pain)
girl I don’t want to go to bed mad at you
and I don’t want you to go to bed, mad at me
no I don’t want to go to bed mad at you
and I don’t want you to go to bed, mad at me (oh noo, nooo, noo)
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| Skinny Puppy |
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Male 35 years old United States |
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User Reply #194228
( 05/28/09 - 02:50 AM )
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This Piece Of Me
Chanting,
the living m____
whispered seeds of hate,
brings unseen,
impossibility,
and a growing seal of fate.
An emptiness,
so vile,
real and it's distorted,
screaming,
silence is good enough.
--- Warning,
it's creeping,
brings out the ravaged,
mindlessly shallow,
swallowed in shadow,
and it's in this..........
Words shouted black,
grave dances,
they were contorted,
(twisted)
searching blindly,
(blindly searching)
wasting,
in stranger lands.
Unity of minds,
grief twisted,
non emotion,
no presence,
a sufficiency,
exact and extreme.
--- Mourning,
objective season,
burnt offerings,
to an empty godless,
face,
hourgl____
impatiently,
revolving,
as the hammer falls.
It's growing,
on empty staircase,
the things in the hall,
vacant voices,
follow,
whispering......
Seal me,
among the wicked,
gone to seed,
still impotent,
in a sea of greed,
lust,
uninhibited rust,
crushing,
and thus discarded,
this piece of me.........
C.L.Rich 2003
Copyright © 2009 Christopher Rich
All Rights Reserved
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